For this story, I could change how Hariswami's wife went missing, making it her choice after being promised all the jewels she could imagine. I could include someone that saw the wife leaving, and telling Hariswami, which led him on the wild goose chase of finding his wife. Leaving the important part about the hawk, snake and charitable woman.
Twenty-Two Goblins, The Snake's Poison
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